Ultimate Iron Man

3.75/5The writing is good overall ( there are some sections of excessive use of broken phrase style of embarrassing phrasing repeated three or times) Very unique parallel to MCU, although the differences between movies and this particular universe could have used better exposition in a few cases. The narration got the pacing right in the good zone if one doesn't mind the occasional venture in dry details on plot progress. Great take on Marvel ultimates although there isnt a central antagonist at this point (Thanos doesnt count in my view cause I really don't know what Marvel ultimates actually entails that far into the story)

The time transitions and Research are better presented but even those parts were riddled with an almost textbookstyle summarised bullet points for uses of each tech