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2 users have written reviews for the Did she already know what I would ask her for? novel and rated it with an average score of 3.3 out of 5.

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Szabolcs Vörös
Szabolcs Vörös
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1 week ago
(3)

Currently at ch. 92.

MC has no love for his girls (yes, possible harem), only want to satisfy his sexual desire and kinks, he is acting all lovey-dovey but actually doesn't respect or being kind in any way (later he changes on this aspect) , the girls are kind of like robots, behaving in a singular way with little progression, doesn't utilize the system to its limit, just using it somewhat to fit the plot, the plot is strong and there is nothing unexpected even though he has barely any luck which is clearly explained that low luck equals more danger than generally. The world building is low and doesn't show much and there is no history, like no past, everything just as it is, it doesn't feel alive, feels artificial (yes events occur but those events don't matter too much), the are quite questionable loopholes in the story, and even more as it progresses (the traveler class acquisition is totally sus, like it cannot be explained how other travelers got the class BCS there is a clear criteria with each class, the traveler has to go through space travel fifty times, which basically is tp, but the only mention in the story is that travelers can use space travel, so how in the hell got anyone before the class if there are no natural way to experience space travel? The whole class acquisition is contradictory from the get go)

The good points is the system, it's simple, it's see through, it's easy to understand just how strong it is and how much potential there is to it, the side characters have a lot of personality, uniqueness

Edit: chapter 97-98.

Inconsistent story, naaaah man... I can't anymore I dropped it

Alright, re edit time: 

So this war part was really inconsistent and strange, but in later half everything turned out to be better, 🙏, the MC and his girls developed a complex personality Yey! Finally character development was in need and it got delivered nicely, the girls own inner monologues directly help out a lot the story, though I don't quite get the smart clone's existence, I get the unbalanced stat part but it's not relative to the quantity of stat points, like if you had 70 points in everything and you would remain still "dumb" then it's strange if it's only a matter of distribution and not quantity.

Vnz893
Vnz893
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9 months ago
(3.5)

The story has good narrative and pacing. There is a little plot armor mixed in but nothing overly unreasonable. The only negative is the inconsistent character of the MC. Some times he is ruthless in dispatching anyone who so much as gives him bad look yet other times he becomes an absolute pushover with support characters that he processes to dislike. I stopped around ch120 because I can't deal with the humiliation kink the MC is oblivious about.

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