The Second Coming of Gluttony

This is, by far, one of the best web novels I've read. It features fantastic world-building and excellent character development. However, the author falls short in some areas, particularly by continuously belittling the main character's depression and labeling it as an addiction. Additionally, he does not clearly explain that some of the main character's childish behaviors stem from his escapism as a way to cope with the trauma from his family background. 

Seol, the main character, can be somewhat annoying at times due to his childlike behavior. However, you'll come to appreciate everything he selflessly does for his friends in Paradise and his efforts to repair his relationship with his family. The fight scenes are well-written and have a strong connection to the past, and Seol's power-ups are generally understandable, especially when you consider his future vision. The choreography in the fight scenes and the psychological thriller elements are described so vividly that I've unwillingly found myself staying up all night out of sheer immersion. While there is an annoying harem element, it becomes negligible since the manmade cockblock of a MC ignores all women except Yuhei. (unless you delve into the side stories). Overall, I'd give it a 9/10—it's a must-read.

solid story but the harem is... massive. if you can stand harems I would reccomend because the mc's character development and the story with his family is quite good in my opinion, the comedy is also kind of on point a lot of the time at least for me. (note: I read this probably over a year ago so I might be misremembering some things) but keep in mind that the main character is quite frankly retarded and does s*it in fights that makes no sense with having random a*s powerups that feel stupid as hell at least to me and he always lets his teammates get hurt but when they get hurt he gets that powerup which I feel is fine to do once or twice but its overused as hell in this novel. you will probably hate and love (maybe not love) the main character at the same time like I did but I think its not that horrible as a novel.