Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra

El tema principal de la novela está bien; el problema es que cada capítulo tiene un 80% de estas frases. 

El aire se densificó. El silencio se agudizó. No parpadeó. No se levantó. Su mirada se detuvo. Los ojos de Lucavion se entrecerraron. Y uno en la comisura de su boca se movió hacia arriba y algunos otros... XD

Este autor abusa de un uso dramático innecesario de estas y otras frases. Ojalá entendiera que no necesitamos una telenovela inspirada en una vieja película de karate, sino una novela que no parezca recortada en cada párrafo.

Es como si alguien te interrumpiera cada segundo; la narración se interrumpe constantemente por líneas innecesarias.

Si puedes sobrevivir a eso, entonces eres un Buda... XD

I stayed up way to late reading this quick review before I got to bed. This is honestly one of the greatest novels I read in awhile I read a lot of poisons and this wasn't one of them the me can tend to be goofy a lot of the times and that may upset sum people because he's like that in all the serious conversations etc but that who is he hide behind a mask of emotions. The tags have romance in them and while there is like 3 or 4 girls mentiond though out the novel he only gets with one so far so no harem and the romance is like a max of 4 pages he doesn't change his goals overall this s tier for me

This novel might seem slow, but it's written in a beautifully poetic way. The author leans more into this poetic type of writing the farther you read, and it's quite beautiful. I'm not sure if they're learning as they go, or if it's intentional but I am very glad I found this novel. This is the only time I've ever bothered to write a review about a book, but this one deserves it.

Prometia la novela pero se fue al caño el MC tiene la Psicólogia de omniciencia en algunos puntos no se sabe si es el autor mismo que pinta sus emociones como en la parte donde lucha en un torneo y mediante solo hablar gana merito solo por que si y sigue de forma que ya no hay nada epico ni sorpresas es mas la venganza se pierde

This story has some of the best character development I've seen in years.

Although the start might be a little disorienting for some, it quickly becomes a solid basis for the protagonist's motivations.

In fact every single charcter mentioned seems alive and has their own unique viewpoint and motivation for their actions.

For those who seek quick dopamine, this is not it. However, remember that Patience is a Virtue.

A great read, very interesting to see how the MC develops. Although the author could have made the fights a bit longer but this novel is good for a casual read and it's very enjoyable🔥

Not much I can say for this novel but this novel is interesting to me Great fun how to see MC interactions on other characters,

Good recommendations

i've read 80 chapters so far. the emotional intensity is well portrayed, and the main character's inner world is compelling. however, most scenes focus solely on the protagonist, and the side characters lack depth. the writing flows smoothly, and despite some predictable events, it's still engaging. i can’t comment on the ending yet, but the story so far shows promise. with a more balanced character distribution, it could’ve scored higher.

This novel is pretty good. Do yah there is like a weird section of the book at around chapter 90 where they explain things too much. The author quickly fixes it. The battle scenes are really well written and the MC's personality is really likable. I like how he teases other to hide his own darkness. I can say this is really good. I don't know why it's not that popular.

Loved the story! It did start off alittle slow in the beginning but I've come to really enjoy these last couple of arcs. Definitely recommend!