Mother of Learning

I would have given it a 9/10 for all the diversity in story setup,good time loop exploration,etc ..

But will give 7.5/10 due to ending of the story,as the villian is underwhelming and all the suspense is wasted on villian,could have used suspense and and a good villian not some lawyer...

Nonetheless whole story setup is great  and I would recommend to anyone.🥸🥸🥸

This is a masterpiece! I was hooked from start to finish—such a well-written and tightly woven story. Loved every bit of it!

No regrets in reading this—enjoy it while you’re still untouched by its brilliance. Because once you finish? You’ll wish you could erase your memory just to experience it all over again.

10/10 there is nothing to not like about this story.

It's almost a decade's worth of work by the author, the story is so good paced u won't feel bored at any point.

Every part feels important, every fight and every new piece of information. The ending was beautifully written and was perfect in wrapping up the complicated situations and being yhe epitome of character dev of Zorian, but imo the journey was more worth while. You get anything and everything.

Zorian and Zach can be considered two MCs and Zorian is the one who's the brains, the artificer and the perfectionist. Zach plows thru with friendship and pure power. Character development of both is so good, specially Zorian's who's change is highlighted a lot too. He feels so real??? The characters feel really very real. The info dumps as many call it, are actually pretty important and necessary too. Naming:

10/10

Story development: 10/10

Ending: good

Journey: better

Character development+relationships: 10/10

There is no need to even think. Just read it.  Peace

Long chapters and a great completed story easily deserving of a spot in the top 10. A must read for everyone. Do yourself a favour and start reading.

This a masterpiece. It's beautifully written. The charachters are supereb not just some plain people, they have their depth and it;s too good to watch it explored.

Very good story, intresting entertaining and thriller to a large degree.

Personally inside the loop was a seat edge thriller, but in between where was search was organized it felt lagging though it is significant to pot.

Very good power system for a magical world. Niceley done and potrayed.  Have a good fight sequence for a magic journey too.

Good world building though not fully explored gives much finer details to the story

All considered 5/5

One of the best time loop novels i've read. Masterfully crafted, very enjoyable read, don't be put away by the long chapters, it is truly, peak fiction. No annoying system, no S rank bs power scaling, just pure fire. 🔥 

Masterpiece one of the best webnovels ever written. If you are looking for real peak this is your novel it have some topics related to harry potter but a lot more dinamic

One of the best time loop novels I've read so far. Plus, 1/3rd isn't scene descriptions, so it was refreshing to focus on what was actually interesting

Chapters being long looked scary at the start but its just like you are reading 5 normal novel chapters at once. The plot was great, the ending was peak. Zorian is a very interesting MC. One thing i didn't like about the novel was the power growth felt too sudden and too big, I liked where the author skipped over some parts quickly like learning about golem crafting and such. But overall, felt like Zorian got overpowered too quick, ngl i like OP MC's but from zero to hero progression was too fast just wanted it to feel more natural(?).

Chapters being long looked scary at the start but its just like you are reading 5 normal novel chapters at once. The plot was great, the ending was peak. Zorian is a very interesting MC. One thing i didn't like about the novel was the power growth felt too sudden and too big, I liked where the author skipped over some parts quickly like learning about golem crafting and such. But overall, felt like Zorian got overpowered too quick, ngl i like OP MC's but from zero to hero progression was too fast just wanted it to feel more natural(?). I posted this twice somehow and idk how to delete a review...